Showdown at the O.K. Corral
by Hope Anita Smith
When Daddy left,
our house was empty,
too big for the rest of us.
We couldn’t fill up all the space.
Now that he’s back,
I can’t find a place to fit.
There isn’t enough room for me.
Daddy looks the same,
but something’s different.
He takes up too much space.
He’s in my space.
His eyes are constantly
waving the white flag of surrender,
but I am like a gunfighter in the Old West.
I walk around with my words drawn,
ready to fire.
Because this house isn’t big enough
for the two of us.
From: Smith, Hope Anita. 2008. Keeping the Night Watch. New York: Henry Holt, p. 13.
Smith is the recipient of the 2008 Coretta Scott King/John Steptoe New Talent Award and her first book garnered several recognitions, including:
- NCTE Notable Children’s Books in the Language Arts, 2008
- Bank Street Best Children's Book of the Year, 2008
- Bank Street Claudia Lewis Award, 2008
- Books for the Teen Age, New York Public Library, 2008
- Lee Bennett Hopkins Poetry Award Honor Book, 2008
This new work is sure to be just as successful.
And here are some more books for young people with poems about fathers and father figures:Appelt, Kathi. 2004. My Father’s Summers: A Daughter’s Memoirs. New York: Henry
Holt.
Fletcher, Ralph J. 1999. Relatively Speaking: Poems about Family. New York: Orchard.
Grimes, Nikki. 1999. Hopscotch Love: A Family Treasury of Love Poems. New York: Lothrop, Lee & Shepard.
Grimes, Nikki. 1999. My Man Blue: Poems. New York: Dial Books.
Grimes, Nikki. 2002. When Daddy Prays. Grand Rapids, MI: William B. Eerdman.
Hoberman, Mary Ann. 1991. Fathers, Mothers, Sisters, Brothers: A Collection of Family Poems. Boston: Joy Street Books.
Livingston, Myra Cohn, comp. 1989. Poems for Fathers. New York: Holiday House.
Moss, Jeff. 1997. The Dad of the Dad of the Dad of Your Dad. New York: Ballantine.
Sidman, Joyce. 2000. Just Us Two: Poems about Animal Dads. Brookfield, CT: Millbrook Press.
Steptoe, Javaka, comp. 1997. In Daddy's Arms I Am Tall: African Americans Celebrating Fathers. New York: Lee & Low Books.
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Lovely poem expressing the tension between father and son. I'm so glad you reviewed this book. I'm looking for it for our library in the fall. You have a nice book list here too. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteSylvia, thanks for featuring this book. I reviewed THE WAY A DOOR CLOSES for the late, great Riverbank Review and loved it. Looking forward to getting my hands on this one! (Joyce Sidman)
ReplyDeleteHi, Joyce. Thanks for stopping by-- and thank you for YOUR book of "dad" poetry, too!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Hi, Cloudscome! Thanks, as always, for your comments. Glad you found this post helpful!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
I loved THE WAY A DOOR CLOSES. Thanks for blogging about this one. Off to put it on reserve right now!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!... I like it.
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Hi Sylvia,
ReplyDeleteI thought you might want to add Lee Bennett Hopkins' title, BEEN TO YESTERDAYS to your list of books about fathers. Anita Hope Smith's book reminded me of Lee's poignant images of the departed father.
Best regards,
Michele Krueger
Michele,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestion. I'll be sure to add that one!
Sylvia